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Next time host elsewhere.

The car is roughly cut, it's fairly empty, and the effects added are very basic, and poorly done. The text styles could use a lot of work, and the contrast between render and background make every little flaw apparent. For a car advert, it doesn't really advertise the car at all.
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alright thanks.. and sorry bout the hosting
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Lot of empty space.
Poor text.
Effect could be better.
Pretty much everything that Cuda said.

And yes, fish get thirsty.
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Aumaan Anubis wrote:And yes, fish get thirsty.
Prove it.
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