Pistol Model (P22)

Plank755 · Post by **Plank755** » Fri Sep 05, 2008 2:35 pm

A model I made to practice. I think it looks pretty good.
I've seen the error by the handle, and I no the hammer isn't smooth enough. Like I said this was a practice. Constructive criticism accepted. PM me if you would like the model.
Made in Hexagon 2.5
Rendered in 3ds Max

metkillerjoe · Post by **metkillerjoe** » Fri Sep 05, 2008 2:44 pm

I'd say nice work overall on the gun

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Some smoothing errors, and the cocking mechanism needs smoothing. I don't know the gun, but the trigger guard looks a bit thin.

Philly · Post by **Philly** » Fri Sep 05, 2008 2:45 pm

That looks like something which I would consider using in a game. Consider that a compliment, but not in modelling terms, because I like chunky weapons.

Plank755 · Post by **Plank755** » Fri Sep 05, 2008 2:49 pm

Very Funny. Thanks for the compliments.
I'll keep on modeling.

DeadHamster · Post by **DeadHamster** » Fri Sep 05, 2008 4:08 pm

THe Trigger looks too smooth, dont blend the edges maybe?

And then what you pointed out.

There appear to be two errors (maybe?) in the handle, one by trigger and one in the first picture, about 2/3 down on the very back.

Besides that, it's beautiful. Do a bit more on the top, like the ridges. Little details like that.

JK-47 · Post by **JK-47** » Fri Sep 05, 2008 4:11 pm

The area where the grip meets the trigger guard is horrid.

martynball · Post by **martynball** » Fri Sep 19, 2008 8:00 am

Work on the trigger guard and it will be nice.

TomClancey · Post by **TomClancey** » Thu Oct 02, 2008 6:21 pm

I remember when I modeled that gun, fun model.

Looks fairly accurate, some inconsistencies here and there, as well as others have said, the transition from grip to trigger guard could use a lot of work.