[Model][WIP] Beretta M9

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[Model][WIP] Beretta M9

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ok, so bfeo flames wanted me to try out a beretta model...and here it is, this is my first pistol remodel, so i dont really have that much experience with it...

the fp pics are taken with the h3 pistol animations, because the default animations for h1 made the model looks like (@#*@ and there are other little things but i wont even bother getting into that

anyhow, as you can see in the pics, the slide works like the real thing i believe; there is that small thing in the front when the slide goes back that i cant remove because i must have scaled it with the front piece to the point that no matter how i try to scale back it is lost and cannot be found in the modeling program =( oh well, my first pistol remodel so what can i say?

raw model:

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spawn:

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first person:

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third person:

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EDIT: FP model fixed (kinda..ish..you tell me)

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any criticism would be good
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Post by {TP}Spartan »

I'm glad this is only a WIP

Kinda messy but it's not a start not bad
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Yeah, you've gotten the general shape down nicely, but there are quite a few flaws as of now. Keep working on it, I'd like to see this finished.
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yeah, it can be improved but the essence of it is there.
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Post by [RR]RedRene »

WTF is wrong with that Spartan?

It's nice, still need's some work thoguh, as I can see the skin stretching, 7/10.
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Post by Loor »

Looks quite good, apart from the fact that the 3rd person seems to be missing fingers.

Also, whats that sniper model? I like it :P
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[RR]RedRene wrote:WTF is wrong with that Spartan?

It's nice, still need's some work thoguh, as I can see the skin stretching, 7/10.
Its on low textures, anyway the models good 8/10 from me
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Post by The.Only.Assault »

wow that looks pretty sexy :D.

But in the edit i think the back looks worse than the first one. but thats just my opinion. 7/10 because of the back part.

BTW, Whats wrong with his fingers? :?
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Yeah, alright. Very messy. You got the basic shape down, so I think it could look awesome! keep working on it. :)


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Post by au5t3n5 »

Achronos-117 wrote:Its on low textures, anyway the models good 8/10 from me
yes, i had to upgrade my xp lappy to vista cause i killed xp, soo halo must run on low everything so as to keep my lappy from melting/exploding on me
Loor wrote:Looks quite good, apart from the fact that the 3rd person seems to be missing fingers.

Also, whats that sniper model? I like it :P
its just something i threw together

its at bfeo http://www.bfeo.org/forum/index.php?topic=303.0

i can upload here later i spose...
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Post by shortbusheros4 »

yeah, most models i've seen are nice and clean and such BUT lack detail and therefore = BORING!!

yeah, it bugs me when people are all like "hey look! I made a model of a real gun!!" then its just a black rectangular boxy thing with no way of telling where any of the detail or anything is.

this model actually is pretty flashy with the amount of details that you are trying to achieve and looks like it would be way cool if you just got it all the way cleaned up! =)
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needs a new skin....
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nuuu, download dissappeared
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The.Only.Assault wrote:wow that looks pretty sexy :D.

But in the edit i think the back looks worse than the first one. but thats just my opinion. 7/10 because of the back part.

BTW, Whats wrong with his fingers? :?
you should probably tak eof that animated sig......


.....................on topic.................
it actually is pretty good.
but there is lots of stretching and stray verts
generally in a situation like
this it better to start from scratch and try not to move verts in
such an aggressive manner.
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The shape is good, but it's a little messy.
Decent start.
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Post by Hero200 »

thats pretty cool
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Post by Mr.Brightside »

almost a one month bump, btw.


Looks extremely stretched.
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If he had a good skin for it a month ago, it would've been good.
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Post by Cobain »

oh holy crap did i do that?
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nah, look one post above your's
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