It's a little unclear to see.. its always an idea to render the model and then use that to showcase it. that way the wireframe wouldn't be there (or u could just uncheck edged faces to take the screenshot).
It looks cool, i'm sure once its textured up it'll be worth a play. Its just needs a bit of touching up and this could be a hit. Exploring the vertical might be an idea.. stuff like that but i understand its work in progress.
Great work
