Halo Art Showcase / Critique

Sarb · Post by **Sarb** » Tue Feb 20, 2007 7:53 pm

Visor looks great!

Darco · Post by **Darco** » Tue Feb 20, 2007 9:34 pm

is the ankle supposed to have the secondary color?

Veegie · Post by **Veegie** » Tue Feb 20, 2007 9:49 pm

Jordan · Post by **Jordan** » Tue Feb 20, 2007 9:57 pm

I only really like it in the thumbnail you posted, because that visor is soooo nice.

Darco · Post by **Darco** » Wed Feb 21, 2007 10:02 am

alright, im done. the main purpose was just to create materials for the balls that looked decent.

TomClancey · Post by **TomClancey** » Wed Feb 21, 2007 2:17 pm

Wow, thats really good, I like the originality and bumpmaps, also the reflection is just right on the visor and the balls.

Jordan · Post by **Jordan** » Thu Feb 22, 2007 9:52 am

I think the shadows look a little more realistic now, but I just don't like the armor on the MCs or Elites. It's too reflective for my taste.

JunkfoodMan · Post by **JunkfoodMan** » Thu Feb 22, 2007 9:58 am

Im not a fan of the table, it seems too sharp on the edges, And that texture for the pocket looks like stone >.>

Ephrum · Post by **Ephrum** » Fri Mar 02, 2007 4:41 pm

(click for full image)

Woww, I've been working on it all day (from scratch again... my computer decided to shit the bucket and freeze up durring a save while I was tweaking/done with my RvB scene... sooo... from scratch, for the ****ing 3rd time now... I hate my life.

JunkfoodMan · Post by **JunkfoodMan** » Fri Mar 02, 2007 4:54 pm

Very nice, but a bit too snowy, and a bit Desaturated.

Pyroman · Post by **Pyroman** » Fri Mar 02, 2007 5:24 pm

The ground texture in the middle isn't correct. But it looks very good. I can finally see the bumps as well.

Darco · Post by **Darco** » Tue Mar 06, 2007 8:05 pm

http://useruploads.mythica.org/view/mc_hood2.mov

animated and rigged by Grim_R3aper.
Materials/Lighting and rendered by me.

Tural · Post by **Tural** » Tue Mar 06, 2007 8:48 pm

Motions aren't very fluent, very unnatural looking.
He doesn't move enough in the throw.
Head and neck aren't flush with one another.

Trulife8342 · Post by **Trulife8342** » Sat Mar 10, 2007 11:01 am

Darco · Post by **Darco** » Sat Mar 10, 2007 11:03 am

whoah, he looks like a toy. the box needs a different texture, cuz i thought it was just a random square at first. and the rubber is way dark.

foxfanatic23I7 · Post by **foxfanatic23I7** » Sat Mar 10, 2007 11:04 am

Lol, can you say car emblem?

Trulife8342 · Post by **Trulife8342** » Sat Mar 10, 2007 11:05 am

Veegie · Post by **Veegie** » Sat Mar 10, 2007 11:05 am

I don't get it.

Darco · Post by **Darco** » Sat Mar 10, 2007 11:06 am

foxfanatic23I7 wrote:Lol, can you say car emblem?

hood ornament?

foxfanatic23I7 · Post by **foxfanatic23I7** » Sat Mar 10, 2007 11:10 am

Mb I'm a little slow k?