hopefully an improvement

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hopefully an improvement

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Post by FloppyGecko »

the content and navigation boxes dont line up with the top banner.
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Post by RaVNzCRoFT »

Let's put it this way...tan and red don't match. :x

It's also way too simple, and that white area looks bad.
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harsh but thats ok i respect your feedback
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Post by [cc]z@nd! »

not bad, but it can still use some work.
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Post by funkadelik_bob »

the text at the top with the reflection isnt reflected right.
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Post by JunkfoodMan »

Its nice, but you need to define what the text is reflecting off.
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I agree with Ravn pretty much, though I do like the text.
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Post by -DeToX- »

Text is good.
The color is bad.
The render doesn't match the color.
The reflection doesn't look good making no sense as it is.
The Gradients don't do it for this too well.
Looks too plain.
The bottom banner with the copy right sign not being close to the name looks awkward.

Keep trying though, you'll get better.
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