a pic of my 2 weblayout

Discuss whatever you want about video games and gaming in general. Be nice though.. fanboys will get a swift kick in the nuts.
Post Reply
tsm124thegreat





Posts: 7
Joined: Sat Jul 29, 2006 5:58 am
Contact:

a pic of my 2 weblayout

Post by tsm124thegreat »

Image

feedback please good or bad
User avatar
D4rkFire




Connoisseur

Posts: 702
Joined: Wed Oct 04, 2006 11:46 am
Location: Florida

Post by D4rkFire »

The colors Clash.
tsm124thegreat





Posts: 7
Joined: Sat Jul 29, 2006 5:58 am
Contact:

Post by tsm124thegreat »

english please
User avatar
Darco




Conceptionist

Posts: 1299
Joined: Sun Apr 16, 2006 12:03 pm

Post by Darco »

it means they dont flow well. choose colors that look better together.
Image
=[
tsm124thegreat





Posts: 7
Joined: Sat Jul 29, 2006 5:58 am
Contact:

Post by tsm124thegreat »

o ok ill be sure to look into it and fix it or just start new

thanks ok so how about this

Image

or this

Image

or this

Image
User avatar
Cuda




Grunge

Posts: 5725
Joined: Tue Oct 18, 2005 2:59 pm
Location: Torrance, CA

Post by Cuda »

Harsh on the eyes.
Image
User avatar
RaVNzCRoFT




Grunge Pyre

Posts: 6208
Joined: Mon Jan 10, 2005 3:05 pm
Location: Raleigh, North Carolina, USA

Post by RaVNzCRoFT »

Particularly the "caution strip lines" are too bright, and the banner is borderline annoying.

The whole thing overall is too simple in my opinion.
User avatar
[cc]z@nd!




Literarian 500

Posts: 2297
Joined: Tue May 04, 2004 1:52 pm
Location: michigan

Post by [cc]z@nd! »

decent, but not great. maybe tone the red down a bit, and see what it looks like if the striped thing between the border and the content is gone, or at least thinner.
tsm124thegreat





Posts: 7
Joined: Sat Jul 29, 2006 5:58 am
Contact:

Post by tsm124thegreat »

ok thanks guys the more feedback the better so now i can try to correct my mistackes but in this case is start new tanks
Post Reply