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What do you think??

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Ok, ill eventually get to the point where i wont have to post every single thing i make, but this is my second set of models, and i just want to know what you guys think and if im heading in the right direction.

Office Furiniture!!! :o
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the file cabinet was the most advanced, but i think they came out pretty well considering my experience :D
and i didnt feel like putting textures on so the bookcase and table look a bit odd.
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Post by RaVNzCRoFT »

They look good, although once again, they're pretty basic. Would you mind putting in a light source and giving us a closer shot of the file cabinet, please?
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sure, ill look at some rendering tuts and try to get one up by tomorrow.
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Post by RaVNzCRoFT »

You don't need a tutorial. Just try putting an omni light on the drawer side of the file cabinet, and take a close-up render of it.
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Ok heres some with some omni lighting
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Thanks patrick, the clay render came out better


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hmm, i just noticed the top label holder is bigger than the bottom label holder
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Looks good for a second model :D
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Post by JK-47 »

Hey dude, those are really nice. You are good at making stuff like this, it reminds me of Counterstrike Source :)
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Post by rossmum »

As far as office furniture goes, yes, you do appear to be heading the right way. :wink:
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