First model! Tommy Gun! Updated!!!! Now with AVI

h2modmaster · Post by **h2modmaster** » Mon Oct 02, 2006 12:49 pm

Continuation of my first model. Check the AVI for best viewing!

If anyone could put it in the game(not sized right), it would be much appreciated (I can't because old GFX card and I get errors) Waterworks preferably but I don't care.

Alchemist666 · Post by **Alchemist666** » Mon Oct 02, 2006 1:07 pm

To boxy O_O

fishface617 · Post by **fishface617** » Mon Oct 02, 2006 1:44 pm

do you mean a thompson? it looks kinda like a thompson

GametagAeonFlux · Post by **GametagAeonFlux** » Mon Oct 02, 2006 2:03 pm

Too boxy, and it looks like the top part near the barrel is missing. Try to use a few reference pictures.

h2modmaster · Post by **h2modmaster** » Mon Oct 02, 2006 2:56 pm

Thanks for the critisism guys. Tommy gun, thomson, same thing :p
Ya I made the whole model without reference, just went of memory. I'm upgrading it now. (Can anyone put it ingame?)

Jsk1610 · Post by **Jsk1610** » Mon Oct 02, 2006 3:11 pm

Doesn't look very accurate. Missing details and not scaled correctly.

h2modmaster · Post by **h2modmaster** » Mon Oct 02, 2006 5:17 pm

Here are original pics

DoorM4n · Post by **DoorM4n** » Mon Oct 02, 2006 6:06 pm

thompson?

Btd69 · Post by **Btd69** » Tue Oct 03, 2006 1:32 am

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=Hunter= · Post by **=Hunter=** » Tue Oct 03, 2006 1:33 am

Far too boxy. Disproportionate. Bland. Lacks any sort of detail or accuracy to the real thing. Find reference pictures and modeling tutorials and start over.

Also, btd wins the thread.

h2modmaster · Post by **h2modmaster** » Tue Oct 03, 2006 7:34 am

What specific parts could use work? (Circle in MS paint?)

=Hunter= · Post by **=Hunter=** » Tue Oct 03, 2006 9:47 am

The whole thing...

h2modmaster · Post by **h2modmaster** » Tue Oct 03, 2006 10:33 am

=Hunter= wrote:The whole thing...

LOL

, well I just got a reference picture and have started a whole new one. Maybe this one will turn out better

SHOUTrvb · Post by **SHOUTrvb** » Tue Oct 03, 2006 12:37 pm

Looks like something off Goldeneye 64. This would be 1337 10/10 h4x in 1997. Now it's just decent. Oh, and Thomposon = Tommy-gun.

=Hunter= · Post by **=Hunter=** » Tue Oct 03, 2006 8:26 pm

h2modmaster wrote:
=Hunter= wrote:The whole thing...
LOL , well I just got a reference picture and have started a whole new one. Maybe this one will turn out better

I await this new model with much eagerness.

Even if a model comes out bad, keep at it, you'll learn as you go from experimenting and the C&C people give you.

h2modmaster · Post by **h2modmaster** » Wed Oct 04, 2006 12:04 pm

=Hunter= wrote:
h2modmaster wrote:
=Hunter= wrote:The whole thing...
LOL , well I just got a reference picture and have started a whole new one. Maybe this one will turn out better
I await this new model with much eagerness.

Even if a model comes out bad, keep at it, you'll learn as you go from experimenting and the C&C people give you.

Thanks, I'm not immature like some people when it comes to getting critism. Even if I think its good, it doesn't mean it is. Some people just don't get that.

Well back on modeling... I'm pretty much done but I have to figure out how to smooth out the handle, and there are not many Anim8or tutorials out there. This could take awhile. Heres 1 of the pics so far. (Please ignore the hastily thrown together textures.)

HaloDude360 · Post by **HaloDude360** » Wed Oct 04, 2006 5:33 pm

This one is a lot better. Tho im not one to critisize cause i cant model whatsoever

RA1N THE ELITE · Post by **RA1N THE ELITE** » Wed Oct 04, 2006 7:02 pm

pretty cool. 8/10.

h2modmaster · Post by **h2modmaster** » Thu Oct 05, 2006 11:57 am

HaloDude360 wrote:This one is a lot better. Tho im not one to critisize cause i cant model whatsoever

Critisize all you want!

h2modmaster · Post by **h2modmaster** » Thu Oct 05, 2006 1:08 pm

updated