AT4 - My first weapon

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AT4 - My first weapon

Post by FleetAdmiralBacon »

Ok, well, I'm working on a weapon to replace the tube in Separated.
It's a simple AT4:
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Right now, that's the model. I'm looking for someone to skin it.
It is my first weapon, btw, so yeah...
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Post by RaVNzCRoFT »

Needs smoothing.
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It has smoothing.
The only places that don't are the ends, just like in my references pics.
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Post by SnaFuBAR »

post more renders of it. i can't see the details, or possible lack thereof.
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Post by citruspers »

looks good for a first :)
but i'd really make the tip a bit more smoothed
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Post by [cc]z@nd! »

chamfer (i think is the right term) the edges just a bit on the ends. not enough, i know it's supposed to look like that, but enough to keep it from looking like it's half-assed low-poly
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Made a few tiny modifications and made a texture:
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I'm not good at UVing, so it's a simple cylinder UV job and the texture was just a simple one based off of one of my reference pics
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Post by cooldude5990 »

not a bad model but loose the skin

do you use 3ds max?
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cooldude5990 wrote:not a bad model but loose the skin

do you use 3ds max?
1. I'm NOT losing the skin, it took an hour to make and no one else has even offered to make one for me. Plus it looks great in-game.
2. yes
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Post by cooldude5990 »

try to add some "texture" it

add some noise mb

and talk to me on aol or something and ill teach you how to render
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Post by RaVNzCRoFT »

Add some slight brushing to the skin to make it look wartorn.
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Post by SnaFuBAR »

post a render from the same angle as your reference, without a skin on it, just clay. it looks like you're missing an assload of detail.
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Post by FleetAdmiralBacon »

SnaFuBAR wrote:post a render from the same angle as your reference, without a skin on it, just clay. it looks like you're missing an assload of detail.
I'm working on some of the details, and I added some dirt to the texture.
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Post by citruspers »

i don't care what everybody says, i think it looks good :)
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I made a few modifications since that pic, but I'm not gonna try and get the new one in game yet.
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Post by citruspers »

looks good, but the ends are a bit too...clean brown.
it really needs some scratches etc.
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Post by rossmum »

That video card is lolcrap.

Not a bad model/skin though, all considered.
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Post by SnaFuBAR »

i'm sorry, but, i hate that texture. the camo kills it.
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