My ATV - Need some advice

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My ATV - Need some advice

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Okay, first off, this isn't from scratch. It is odviously modeled off the Warthog and I actually got this from TurboSquid and did some editing of it (it is thinner in general, has two guns now, the wheels are slightly bigger...etc...etc, slight modifications). It sucks and I need some advice on how to make it better. Here's some pics:

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I am modeling this in Gmax so keep that in mind if you give me any advice. Thanks very much in advance.
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Post by Darkstorm995 »

pretty good since its an edited warthog
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Post by scar tissue »

I think the wheels look too big but w/e.

I need some ideas for additions and any corrections you think should be made.
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Post by wes »

add headlights mb?
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Post by da_undertucker »

and put a seat on the back, like a try thing from the pics from the bungie site
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da_undertucker wrote:and put a seat on the back, like a try thing from the pics from the bungie site
That is exactly what I was gonna do a forgot. Thanks.

There is one headlight but it is small.
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Post by halobuddha »

STEERING WHEEL!!!! bsides that its really good
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halobuddha wrote:STEERING WHEEL!!!! bsides that its really good
Thankz, I forgot about that too. I put in handle bars instead but I haven't added the final details.
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wlcm
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Post by RaVNzCRoFT »

It's pretty good, but yoyorast has already modeled an exceptional ATV for his map.
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Post by halobuddha »

why do you keep critisizing stuff its still good and thats not really relevant
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Post by Cuda »

ooh a turret.
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? ohh a turret wth is that supposed to meen
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Post by Cuda »

add a turret to the back :?
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Post by halobuddha »

oooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhh ok my bad
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