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The Official Poetry Thread
Posted: Sat Dec 15, 2007 8:00 pm
by Xiion
http://xiion.deviantart.com/art/I-m-Fal ... u-72218767
after writing my latest poem about this girl i love, i feel there should be a poetry thread here to discuss or show off any poems the community has written.
don't flame, or get offtopic here, ok??
Posted: Sat Dec 15, 2007 8:47 pm
by StalkingGrunt911
Poetry. :/
I just hope MidoriSakuragi doesn't post here. :X
Just wondering the girl you like, do you know her in real life? This is her dART right?
http://sakurafairy24.deviantart.com/ I saw her comment. ;P
Oh and if you don't want me to post that link just PM.
Posted: Sat Dec 15, 2007 9:39 pm
by Xiion
yeah, thats the girl.
she goes to my school.
Posted: Sun Dec 16, 2007 12:13 am
by Kirk
sakurafairy24 wrote:We started out strong
Always enjoying eachothers company
But now you've betrayed me
And im ending everything
Ive given you chances
Trying to change for the better
But all you ever do
Is make it worse
Your loud
Your annoying
Your childish
Your uncaring
You think something is funny
But never listen to the words NO! or STOP!
Im tired of trying
I dont want to do it anymore
You want to keep acting like this
Then find someone who actually wants to listen
Im done
Done with your comments
Done with your attitude
Done with you
As of now,
Im moving on
When will you?
I'm not entirely sure your latest poem was effective.
Posted: Sun Dec 16, 2007 2:49 am
by Xiion
Kirk wrote:sakurafairy24 wrote:We started out strong
Always enjoying eachothers company
But now you've betrayed me
And im ending everything
Ive given you chances
Trying to change for the better
But all you ever do
Is make it worse
Your loud
Your annoying
Your childish
Your uncaring
You think something is funny
But never listen to the words NO! or STOP!
Im tired of trying
I dont want to do it anymore
You want to keep acting like this
Then find someone who actually wants to listen
Im done
Done with your comments
Done with your attitude
Done with you
As of now,
Im moving on
When will you?
I'm not entirely sure your latest poem was effective.
read my comment, she was writing of an old friend who i know as well.
>_>
Posted: Sun Dec 16, 2007 3:10 am
by Kirk
Right.
(just kidding around by the way, if it wasn't obvious enough)
Posted: Sun Dec 16, 2007 3:14 am
by Xiion
Kirk wrote:Right.
(just kidding around by the way, if it wasn't obvious enough)
<_<
>_>
DAMN YOU KIRRKKK!!
lawlz
Posted: Sun Dec 16, 2007 12:21 pm
by Danke
Rabbits running
Rabbits chasing
Trying to eat my brains
Scratching, biting,
Gnawing, fighting,
Going for my veins
I punch them,
Kick them,
Beat them,
But never lick them,
Stab them in their hearts
But they just come back again,
zombunnies without smarts
Posted: Sun Dec 16, 2007 12:41 pm
by shadowkhas
Haha oh wow.
Posted: Sun Dec 16, 2007 12:54 pm
by JacksonCougAr
Danke wrote:Rabbits running
Rabbits chasing
Trying to eat my brains
Scratching, biting,
Gnawing, fighting,
Going for my veins
I punch them,
Kick them,
Beat them,
But never lick them,
Stab them in their hearts
But they just come back again,
zombunnies without smarts
Can I like print that out, frame it, and hang it on my wall with a picture of you under it? That is amazing :p
Posted: Sun Dec 16, 2007 1:22 pm
by {TP}Spartan
WOW,lol raving rabbits
Posted: Sun Dec 16, 2007 6:06 pm
by Dissolution241
WOW, FUCK YOUR SMALL TEXT! A HAHA! HA!
Posted: Sun Dec 16, 2007 7:04 pm
by Hawaiian Modder
That seamed un-needed/Made you look very arrogant and stupid.
Umm...
I'm a poet and I didn't know it.
Posted: Mon Dec 17, 2007 5:39 am
by SpecOp44
I can rhyme.
Look at the time.
A gummy bear walks on the forest path.
Suddenly, his leg is caught in a bear trap, he is forced to eat it off, resulting in a blood bath.
He screams for his life.
But then someone stabs him with a knife.
A guitar is heard wailing in the distance.
The bear sees it's a ninja playing, and gets super pumped in the instance.
He feels
REAL ULTIMATE power, and wants to kill something.
Just then Shaquille O'Neil walks by, unsuspecting.
A gory battle is sure to ensue.
Just then global warming kills everyone.
Not to toot my own horn, but that's probably the best poem written in the history of mankind.
Posted: Mon Dec 17, 2007 9:22 am
by RaVNzCRoFT
Author's Comments
I'm falling for this one girl, and she knows it. i love you, Anna!
comment it please, as it didn't take me too long to type up.
but i am a great poet, so this is my feelings right now all summed up.
...
Posted: Mon Dec 17, 2007 10:22 am
by Senor_Grunt
To be hurt
To feel lost
To be left out in the dark
To be kicked when you're down
To feel like you've been pushed around
To be on the edge of breaking down
And no one's there to save you
No you don't know what it's like
Welcome to my life.
Not exactly a poem, or mine, but if I could make it a poem, I would. I just don't do poems.
Posted: Mon Dec 17, 2007 10:24 am
by bibbit
I don't see how it's not a poem.
I have written a few songs/poems, but I am too lazy to type/find them. Plus, they're not very good. At all. :p
I hope you didn't make that site. :/
Posted: Mon Dec 17, 2007 10:26 am
by Senor_Grunt
Its just a section of a song from Simple Plan. I have songs too, but, they lack lyrics. >_>
Posted: Mon Dec 17, 2007 11:03 am
by SpecOp44
bibbit wrote:
I hope you didn't make that site. :/
No, but I was inspired by it. That and the Robot Chicken parody with gummy bears.
Posted: Mon Dec 17, 2007 4:15 pm
by noscottno
RaVNzCRoFT wrote: Author's Comments
I'm falling for this one girl, and she knows it. i love you, Anna!
comment it please, as it didn't take me too long to type up.
but i am a great poet, so this is my feelings right now all summed up.
...
...lol