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My newest piece devoted to my Girl...
Posted: Sun Dec 09, 2007 10:47 pm
by MidoriSakuragi
You
All I ever do is stare out my window,
Waiting for you my love,
everyday I'm in so much pain
because I cant feel your love.....
You are my hero,
my girl,
my life,
forever in love with you,
Oh Katarina, I dream.....
Even if it hurts I love you,
Even if your far away I love you,
Even when you call me an idiot I love you,
Forever my girl.......
And I feel your heart,
when I sleep,
when I fall,
When I call,
When I get up and your not there....
Oh I love you.....
My beautiful Katarina....
I could cry for your love,
but its hurts,
like the razerblade I feel,
when I am sad and mad.....
[instrumental]
God's will be done....
[instrumental]
Your motivation,
my dreams,
my feelings,
so deep.....
For you
This is how I feel about my awesome relationship...
should I sing it while playing my guitar? (getting one for Xmas WOOT, yeah I know its abit out of subject and all... but anyways, focus on the song)
Posted: Sun Dec 09, 2007 10:54 pm
by Dr.Cox
Cliche.
Posted: Sun Dec 09, 2007 10:56 pm
by MidoriSakuragi
Hey its love, what can I say?
go find a chick dude
Posted: Sun Dec 09, 2007 10:58 pm
by Dr.Cox
Have one.
Posted: Sun Dec 09, 2007 11:02 pm
by Tural
MidoriSakuragi wrote:go find a chick dude
You're cool.
Posted: Sun Dec 09, 2007 11:06 pm
by Xiion
Tural wrote:MidoriSakuragi wrote:go find a chick dude
You're cool.
werd
Posted: Sun Dec 09, 2007 11:08 pm
by MidoriSakuragi
I'm sooo sorry..... Please... forgive me....
Please consider this, wouldn't you write something for your mate?
I feel so sad now.....
Ah my razer blade...
Posted: Sun Dec 09, 2007 11:10 pm
by Tural
What.
Posted: Sun Dec 09, 2007 11:12 pm
by MidoriSakuragi
I'm sorry I'm having some serious emotional outbreaks.... Oh I've been rude in the past and I'm sorry....
Posted: Sun Dec 09, 2007 11:18 pm
by Dr.Cox
MidoriSakuragi wrote:I'm sooo sorry..... Please... forgive me....
Please consider this, wouldn't you write something for your mate?
I feel so sad now.....
Ah my razer blade...
No. As I said before it's cliche.
Posted: Sun Dec 09, 2007 11:19 pm
by Cuda
Wrists+Razorblades.
A match made in Heaven.
Posted: Sun Dec 09, 2007 11:26 pm
by MidoriSakuragi
You have no feelings.... I'm going to go cry and stab myself....
Posted: Sun Dec 09, 2007 11:53 pm
by Cuda
MidoriSakuragi wrote:You have no feelings.... I'm going to go cry and stab myself....
I have feelings. They do get hurt sometimes. I just don't go around and write shit poems about how I'm going to kill myself over them.
Posted: Mon Dec 10, 2007 12:43 am
by ScottyGEE
It is clich
Posted: Mon Dec 10, 2007 7:31 am
by warlord
@scotty:
*sadistic kink chick.
seriously if your gonna woo a girl you seem to know how not to do it...
instead of writing poems that not even a blindman would be interested in reading [ooh the paradox] why something else.
go for a meal or somthing.
Posted: Mon Dec 10, 2007 7:58 am
by Hawaiian Modder
Actually believe it or not a lot of girls actually go for that kind of stuff. They find it cute and if your lucky.
Posted: Mon Dec 10, 2007 9:05 am
by INSANEdrive
MidoriSakuragi wrote:I'm sooo sorry..... Please... forgive me....
Please consider this, wouldn't you write something for your mate?
I feel so sad now.....
Ah my razer blade...
Tural wrote:What.
He has gone "crazy with Love" ( O wow.... LAWL...)
Isn't it obvious?
Mabey its just me. >_>
MidoriSakuragi wrote:I'm sorry I'm having some serious emotional outbreaks.... Oh I've been rude in the past and I'm sorry....
Vent some where else
Posted: Mon Dec 10, 2007 12:29 pm
by warlord
@Hawaiian Modder:
most girls that i've known are not interested if your gonna go poetic they like to think your just desparite [sp?] their more interested in going out somewhere rather than spending time reading some jibber jabber.
Posted: Mon Dec 10, 2007 1:47 pm
by Patrickssj6
If you think that poems are special...no they are not. Why? Because even Jesus said that poems are old school.
Do something special and unique only YOU can do to your loved one.
Re: My newest piece devoted to my Girl...
Posted: Mon Dec 10, 2007 2:53 pm
by G.I.R.
MidoriSakuragi wrote:My newest piece devoted to my Girl...
Who's 'your girl' exactly?
Is it the same girl you posted about a couple months ago? You know, about stalking her? If so, it's rather pathetic that you're still obsessing over her.
Anywho. Poem. Right. Lawdy, lawd does this poem reek of emo/cutter. No, you shouldn't play it on guitar, because, I'll assume, you don't actually know how to play one, since asking for one for Christmas implies you don't already have one. And as everyone else said, it's extraordinarily clich