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WIP

Posted: Tue Apr 03, 2007 6:23 pm
by bronchidus
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one was rendered on black(1st) the other on white(2nd). I want some opinions on all of it and i need suggestions for the material and if the part that holds the big needle looks good(i think that is bad). Oh and yes i did kinda get the idea from Star Wars(the one where they have Leia in the prison cell) :P

Posted: Wed Apr 04, 2007 2:41 pm
by FReAK
Uhh, this should be in the pictures forum, I believe.

Nice, very detailed. The antenna bothers me, though.

Posted: Wed Apr 04, 2007 4:14 pm
by Cuda
looks like a death star with two prominent pointy things.

Posted: Wed Apr 04, 2007 4:29 pm
by rentafence
Cuda wrote:looks like a death star with two prominent pointy things.
Thats exactly what I though when I first saw it.

Posted: Wed Apr 04, 2007 4:33 pm
by Leiukemia
I don't like it. Also, it looks messy.

Posted: Wed Apr 04, 2007 5:32 pm
by TomClancey
I don't like the use of greeble. It just seems added. And the antena thing is kind ehh, a pulled vert.

Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 10:43 am
by kwazy
isnt that the thing vader used to inject something into that girl?

*cough* botox injection *cough*

Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 11:54 am
by bronchidus
thats what i was goin for but i havnt seen the movie in awhile .. and it was in the pics fourm but it got moved. I need some help in materials for this, so if anyone knows a good tutorial for materials like texturing and stuff it would be greatly appreciated and some suggestions for the part with the neddle, please.

Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 8:32 pm
by OpsY
that antena is much too big... otherwise, it really looks like you tryed to save polyes by adding some "details" to the sphere

Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2007 6:49 am
by Diablo65
Cuda wrote:looks like a death star with two prominent pointy things.
You shouldn't have said that, because my twisted mind thought it was hillarious. >_>;
http://img68.imageshack.us/img68/4871/c ... otemb2.png
Sorry bronchidus.
Back on topic, I think it looks nice. The spear-ish thing at the front is a little bit long to me, but that's just personal taste. I have no idea what these look like "for real".

Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2007 7:50 am
by bronchidus
lol its ok and the neddle is upposed to be bi, thats how i remember it in star wars...

Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2007 8:50 am
by TomClancey
I just don't like because of the simplicity and huge-polly wastage. Its just a greeble with 2 spheres and some pointy pulled vert. It's also very messy and some odd black spots.

Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2007 10:23 am
by Diablo65
I just a vision of one of those orbs gunning down some grunts using it's frontal-mounted machine gun (replaces the spear/needle/pokey tool). :P

Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2007 5:27 pm
by bronchidus
diablo has an imagination... and it wasnt done i was here asking for suggestions on what could be done and such. I cant finish it anyways because i had to reformat my harddrive due to problems and all i backed up was my documents and this was saved in the 3ds max 7 folder :(