My First Model: Walther P99

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My First Model: Walther P99

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Well, I'm going to be calling this my first model. My other one was made in Cinema 4D, it was box modeled, it looked like crap, and I really had no idea what I was doing. But anyway, here's my "first model," the Walther P99. Beautiful gun. Made in 3ds Max 8; plane modeled. Poly-count of 1560. Comments, please. I think the worst part of this model is the terrible job I did rendering it. I'll need to work on that. It looked a lot better when it was actually in 3ds Max, unrendered. However, because it was unrendered, it was pixelated, so I didn't want to post it. Meh, the Walther P99.


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I don't know why the back edge of the magazine isn't showing up in that shot. I have looked, and confirmed, that there is indeed a polygon in that area.
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Post by Doctor »

Looking good; but is this a WIP? It could use some detail.
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Post by Patrickssj6 »

Try to get a wirefram render.But like I said on VA it looks very good for a newbie to 3ds max :D
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Post by cooldude5990 »

very good for a first model, cna you post a wire?
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Post by SnaFuBAR »

missing lots of details. i hope to see you work it out, as you've done well so far.
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Post by RaVNzCRoFT »

Updated with wireframe.
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Post by maca_§ »

Sweet, good job!
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Post by JK-47 »

Looks good, my first pistol sucked.
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Post by rossmum »

Very nice. Very, very nice.
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Post by BEEF!!! »

Looking good so far for a beginner! Keep adding on to it.
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Post by guitarplay »

good job. Ive never used 3d max before seeing as i dont have the money. . . but i like it. My only suggestion for now is to make a grip on the handle. Right now the handle just looks a little bit raw.
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Post by Grunt Rebel »

Much better then my first gun. (Tommy Gun :oops: ). Could use a bit more detail.
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Post by Reaper Man »

hehe nice model, but seeing as ur a mod ud proly abuse those powers if we said summin negative about it :P jk
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Post by RaVNzCRoFT »

I updated with a topic view as well, so you could see some of the detail I had on top of the barrel.
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Post by rossmum »

Seems too narrow, but still very nicely done. Easy fix, anyway.
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Post by xXxCocoFangxXx »

Looks nice!
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Post by RaVNzCRoFT »

I'd like to import this model into Halo PC or Halo CE. Can somebody tell me how to do that? I'd like to have it in PC first, but if it's not possible, then in CE.
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Post by The science of Kaboom »

its a little thin. but nice slide.
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Post by gh0570fchurch »

not possible for pc (it obviously has been a while since youve moddded), but you could do it in ce (i dont know how, since i have absolutely no experience with ce, but there are plenty of people here that could help you with that :wink:)
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Post by xXxCocoFangxXx »

Why can't it be done in PC?
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