[WIP] SMG Concept

The_Hushed_Casket · Post by **The_Hushed_Casket** » Fri May 12, 2006 9:44 pm

I haven't modeled in awhile, but I decided to try to create an SMG based on a concept drawing I found on Google. The magazine is terrible, and I don't like the grip that much, but I'm too tired to fix it tonight.

Grave · Post by **Grave** » Fri May 12, 2006 10:17 pm

i like them i wouldnt mind running around shooting people with them

Cuda · Post by **Cuda** » Fri May 12, 2006 10:54 pm

I like them, but they kinda look like Sawsalls

RaVNzCRoFT · Post by **RaVNzCRoFT** » Sat May 13, 2006 4:45 am

Very nice modeling, but I think the gun itself is a little too thick.

rossmum · Post by **rossmum** » Sat May 13, 2006 4:50 am

Not bad! Add some detail and fix up the mag and they'll be awesome.

SnaFuBAR · Post by **SnaFuBAR** » Sat May 13, 2006 10:24 am

honestly, it looks bad. it loks like a quick spline model for most of it, with very little understanding of the way a collapsing stock works, and some very poor understanding of ergonomics and grips, etc. either your model poorly follows a concept, or it very well follows a very bad concept.

please post the concept, as i have some suspicions about your understanding of it.

Patrickssj6 · Post by **Patrickssj6** » Sat May 13, 2006 10:32 am

RaVNzCRoFT wrote:Very nice modeling, but I think the gun itself is a little too thick.

He says it.

Yeah I agree with snaf too but its still not bad.

The_Hushed_Casket · Post by **The_Hushed_Casket** » Sat May 13, 2006 10:41 am

SnaFuBAR wrote:honestly, it looks bad. it loks like a quick spline model for most of it, with very little understanding of the way a collapsing stock works, and some very poor understanding of ergonomics and grips, etc. either your model poorly follows a concept, or it very well follows a very bad concept.

please post the concept, as i have some suspicions about your understanding of it.

I'm not sure that the stock is supposed to be collapsable. The concept isn't great, I was just bored and googled 'Gun Concepts' and I thought this one looked cool.

As I said before, this was not intended to be a super-detailed model. It was more to get comfortable with the controls of Max, as I've been using C4D lately. It was plane modeled with that concept as a reference, and I have yet to add several small details.

citruspers · Post by **citruspers** » Sat May 13, 2006 10:49 am

I thinkit actually looks pretty good

but i am pretty muxh a n00b modeler

SnaFuBAR · Post by **SnaFuBAR** » Sat May 13, 2006 4:04 pm

ah, i see. it's a pretty bad concept sketch. it in no way communicates form, so i'll let the blame fall on the artist for this one

. you did what you could with that half-ass sketch.

Darkstorm995 · Post by **Darkstorm995** » Sat May 13, 2006 10:12 pm

fix up the clip.

Doctor · Post by **Doctor** » Sun May 14, 2006 8:57 am

I see skill here, but I don't like the model. Too thick, and I don't like the concept. As for the modelling though, nice job.

RaVNzCRoFT · Post by **RaVNzCRoFT** » Sun May 14, 2006 11:44 am

I just noticed that I don't see a trigger on your model, but I do in the concept.

citruspers · Post by **citruspers** » Sun May 14, 2006 12:36 pm

maybe you have to squeeze the barrel to fire?

cooldude5990 · Post by **cooldude5990** » Sun May 14, 2006 12:57 pm

pretty good, i like the barrel design
and the wire around the barrel is supposed to be round

and there is a trigger guard, there is no need to add a trigger if you dont want to.

The_Hushed_Casket · Post by **The_Hushed_Casket** » Sun May 14, 2006 4:31 pm

RaVNzCRoFT wrote:I just noticed that I don't see a trigger on your model, but I do in the concept.

Shhhhh, it's a secret.

I might do some more work on it, but I collapsed the symmetry modifier when I was about half way done, so I'd have to edit a bunch of stuff to make it thinner. Since it's not that great I think I might go for something more detailed and realistic.

xXxCocoFangxXx · Post by **xXxCocoFangxXx** » Mon May 15, 2006 6:24 am

Looks cool!