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My First Reference Picture Modeled Tactical Pistol w/o Trigg
Posted: Tue Jan 03, 2006 4:41 pm
by VZStoked
Well...basically i'm new to modeling and i tried out a tut, and it worked extremely perfectly and so here we are, and this is my first ever model!!!
I just want feedback and stuff...yeah...
Edit: GOD DA*!NIT!!! I can't get the picture to show up...i'll just use the stupid ole linkage...*grumbles something about stupid ole link*
http://putfile.com/pic.php?pic=1/218382457.jpg&s=x11
Edit: i'm not done...just this is what i got as my main gun. notice the no trigger and it's not smoothed...yeah...and if anyone has any tut's on detailing...help would be appreciated.
regards
$70k3l)
Posted: Tue Jan 03, 2006 4:54 pm
by Soccerfreak
Looks damn close to me, but still like.............idk........weird on the edges. i give an 6/10.
Posted: Tue Jan 03, 2006 4:57 pm
by b1@De
7/10 that looks good...i wish that i could model...
Posted: Tue Jan 03, 2006 4:58 pm
by lxNicktardxl
soccerfreak wrote:Looks **** close to me, but still like.............idk........weird on the edges. i give an 6/10.
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I agree. It's very weird on the edges. They need to be rounded some more.
Posted: Tue Jan 03, 2006 6:36 pm
by VZStoked
yeah i didn't bevel before i smoothed so it's not as smooth on the edges of the barrel and stuff.
Posted: Wed Jan 04, 2006 2:06 am
by rossmum
It's more or less a box shaped like a pistol... go back and make parts round, add detail, and fix the thing up. It's your first I know, but I would give you 0.5/10 for the effort it took to trace the outline and extrude it. I could do that in like, 30 seconds...
Posted: Wed Jan 04, 2006 11:56 am
by VZStoked
yeah but i don't nkow how to do that! I have looked through the tutorials and haven't found anything to do with putting detail...and i no that beveling and stuff rounds it, but im' not really done...so yeah...i forgot to mentin that in my first post!
regards,
$70k3l)
Posted: Wed Jan 04, 2006 12:43 pm
by [gx]shadow
I am not trying to be harsh, but 1/10. The model is very boxy and lacks detail. It looks like all you did was trace the picture and extrude. I would read Katarn's post
here. In his post, there are 2 very simple tutorials on modeling guns.
Posted: Wed Jan 04, 2006 1:31 pm
by Infern0
Yeah, most speed modellers can make this in.. what, 10 seconds?
And yes, look for those tutorial Shadow mentioned.
Posted: Wed Jan 04, 2006 2:03 pm
by VZStoked
Wow, nice tut!!! I will definitely get back to modeling with more detail now!!! Thanks for the feedback and stuff...!
regards,
$70k3l)