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WIP: Uzi 9mm
Posted: Mon Dec 20, 2004 9:13 pm
by Burnination
hello again everyone...heres my uzi 9mm..just started tonight..
need to do:
finish up mesh (done)
add details
optimize polys
skin (hopefully
)
constructive criticism plz!
Posted: Mon Dec 20, 2004 10:17 pm
by SnaFuBAR
pretty good! what's the poly count? modeling method?
Posted: Tue Dec 21, 2004 4:16 am
by Pie
pretty good!...just put in some smoothing groups and it will be better
Posted: Tue Dec 21, 2004 7:13 am
by Burnination
plane modelling...not sure of polys...and yes smoothing will be added later
Posted: Tue Dec 21, 2004 9:07 am
by XEliteX
Dude that looks awsome
Posted: Tue Dec 21, 2004 9:19 am
by 2
8/10 - Good job, needs a bit of detail, but good.
Posted: Tue Dec 21, 2004 10:14 am
by Katarn
too many polies used on grip. Unanimatable bolt. Sights have no accuracy whatsoever. Too many polies used on barrel. Stock is incorrect as it rotates. Clip is a box. Too flat, no surface depth.
Posted: Tue Dec 21, 2004 12:14 pm
by Pie
and jsut so you know, since some people misunderstand, katarn is not being mean, he is just telling you what to do to make it better
so take it as good advice not a dis
Posted: Tue Dec 21, 2004 12:17 pm
by SnaFuBAR
yeh, and read his topic on weapon modeling. it's stickied. he makes a lot of good points.
Posted: Tue Dec 21, 2004 2:55 pm
by Katarn
if i sound blunt, it's because i'm trying to explain something with the least and most accurate words possible. If i come out saying it's great and suck up, you'll have less ambition to impress me.
Posted: Tue Dec 21, 2004 3:29 pm
by argrn
Katarn wrote:too many polies used on grip. Too many polies used on barrel. S
Not if it is going in halo.....
Posted: Tue Dec 21, 2004 4:47 pm
by Katarn
It's wastage, you wouldn't be able to tell the difference ingame once it's smoothed.
Posted: Tue Dec 21, 2004 7:10 pm
by McFarlane
Yes for the clip, I just make it match the thing it's inside but make it smaller.
And I add a little more on the clip though.