[WIP] M4A1

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Post by RaVNzCRoFT »

Just redo the ribbing and add a carrying handle to the top and it's awesome!
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Post by rentafence »

TomClancey wrote:Very nice model, great for a first.
It is not my first.

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Post by Caboose{SE} »

It's comin along nice but yea same as Leiukemia said...but i still don't get where all these polies are comin from :? lacks a lot of detail for such high poly
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Maybe I should re-word that, heh. =p

Very nice Model.
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Post by OpsY »

it's great but it would be nice to have a carry handle
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Post by rentafence »

I made the ejection, and fixed up the stock a little.

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Post by TomClancey »

Thats pretty nice, hope to see more updates.
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Post by Leiukemia »

Study the gun more, it's still not right. Want me to list the things?
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Leiukemia wrote:Study the gun more, it's still not right. Want me to list the things?
That would be lovely. Im not trying to be dead accurate, all I care is that it gets the point across that its an M4
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Post by Leiukemia »

Ok well this should hold you over. I think I missed a few things I can't remember. Also, you SHOULD be striving for absolute accuracy. It'll not only look good, but improve your modelling skills. And also, here's a perfect site for referance pictures. And this took me about 30 minutes so you better frickin use it. http://modelguns.co.uk/m4a1_carbine.htm
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Post by rentafence »

Holy fuck man. O_O I realise the rail is the incorrect shape, but im already getting close to 4k polies. =/ I should get to work.
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Post by Caboose{SE} »

can you post a wireframe? it shouldn't be 4k by now. post a wireframe i wanna see if i can help you lower it a bit
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Post by OpsY »

wow great job leukimia on that one lol
yeah 4K is a bit for what you have... unless you hid some perfect sphere somewhere behind this shouldn't be hapenning :p
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Post by rentafence »

UPDATE (<3 caps)

I finished the carry handle, remade the foregrip, and lowered the triangle count to a final 4410. Its basically done, aside from some other small things I forgot.

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Post by fishface617 »

4400 is still high, and I think the ribs on the barrel need to be more defined.

Nice job though.
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Post by Malolo420 »

I agree with fish face on the ribs.
Sig over height, width, and file size limits.
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Post by Caboose{SE} »

fishface617 wrote:4400 is still high, and I think the ribs on the barrel need to be more defined.

Nice job though.
4400 is perfect.

very nice, still a few minor issues, but overall not bad.
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Post by rentafence »

Caboose{SE} wrote:
4400 is perfect.

very nice, still a few minor issues, but overall not bad.
I still wanted it to be lower, but I'm satisfied with it. Mine is nothing compared to yours though. :wink:
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Post by rossmum »

There are some details it could really do without but 4,400 isn't too bad, may as well leave them. Looks nice.

Question, though... don't the side guards for the front sight post curve outwards like the M1, or is that only the M16 and not the M4?
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Post by fishface617 »

Caboose{SE} wrote:4400 is perfect.
I thought that 3500 was about right for a gun, or is that for a hand gun?
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