Scarlet Ibis

xbox · Post by **xbox** » Fri Mar 20, 2009 5:57 pm

Concept art/Storyboard shot from a project I am doing on "The Scarlet Ibis"

Click for 1920x1080.

JK-47 · Post by **JK-47** » Fri Mar 20, 2009 7:35 pm

Looks pretty cool. I'm not a fan of the bushes, though. They bring down the quality of the image a bit, making it seem like the work of a child. While I know these things usually lack detail, there's a fine line between no detail, and just enough detail.
I'd have to say the image's strongest points are the tree and the bird, they are pretty good. Otherwise, it's alright.

xbox · Post by **xbox** » Sat Mar 21, 2009 6:21 am

I agree with you, the bushes were added in at the last minute so that the horizon wasn't so empty.
And I really don't like how the right side of it turned out; the clouds are a bit off and there is too much space.

RaVNzCRoFT · Post by **RaVNzCRoFT** » Sat Mar 21, 2009 8:35 am

Looks pretty good to me; I think the sky is fine. I don't really like the grass, though. Maybe take out the bushes and add a nice grassy texture? It could be both dark green and pale green so it doesn't feel empty.

noscottno · Post by **noscottno** » Sat Mar 21, 2009 10:15 am

Cool colors.

INSANEdrive · Post by **INSANEdrive** » Sat Mar 21, 2009 10:51 am

I like it. Not bad. Can you do More? (Both literally and to the Piece)

xbox · Post by **xbox** » Sat Mar 21, 2009 11:10 am

Yes, I will be doing 6 different pieces and will be re-doing the bushes on this one.
This one is not the first in the set, either, it is just the first I though of to do.

Thank you.

Tural · Post by **Tural** » Sat Mar 21, 2009 11:17 am

Why is your thumbnail such an unnecessarily large file?
640x360 picture that's 841kb.

xbox · Post by **xbox** » Sun Mar 22, 2009 8:29 am

I ran into some problems and lost the .psd for this piece, so I will have to do the best that I can with the bushes now and hope it turns out decent.

ScottyGEE · Post by **ScottyGEE** » Sun Mar 22, 2009 3:02 pm

The grass lacks detail. The rest if good.

WaeV · Post by **WaeV** » Sun Mar 22, 2009 3:03 pm

I like the sun the best.

xbox · Post by **xbox** » Sat Mar 28, 2009 1:52 pm

Thank you.
The one above will stay as is; this is only a school storyboard project, so I'm not going for perfection.

This next piece will be the first in the chronological order of events.
I did all I'm going to do today, but there will be two more people visible in this shot: Doodle and Brother.

INSANEdrive · Post by **INSANEdrive** » Mon Mar 30, 2009 8:34 am

xbox wrote:Thank you.
The one above will stay as is; this is only a school storyboard project, so I'm not going for perfection.

This next piece will be the first in the chronological order of events.
I did all I'm going to do today, but there will be two more people visible in this shot: Doodle and Brother.

Empty Space and Slightly Bland.

I like the Person though...Hair Double So.

xbox · Post by **xbox** » Sat Apr 04, 2009 11:18 am

Yes, there will be some stuff on the table and counter, along with two more people. I also made the wall more orange and made the window slightly bigger.

Edit:

The boy is still incomplete.

Edit2:
How's the grass and sky looking on this one?

WaeV · Post by **WaeV** » Sat Apr 04, 2009 12:14 pm

The table needs to be more obvious. I was wondering what the brown oval was doing for a little bit there.

The grass looks good.

xbox · Post by **xbox** » Sat Apr 04, 2009 12:30 pm

Yes there are plates and stuff on the table, but I won't be uploading another one of that scene until I draw Doodle.

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