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another attempt (UPDATED)
Posted: Thu Mar 05, 2009 6:30 pm
by diamondbackk60
well here is a new attempt at a decent piece of workk.. simple but i thinkk lookks good
UPDATE!!
new attempt at something decent
comments and crit are welcome thanks
Re: another attempt
Posted: Thu Mar 05, 2009 6:41 pm
by JK-47
I'm not liking the font very much. The gradient just looks bad.
Fix up the font a bit. You've got a good idea.
Re: another attempt
Posted: Thu Mar 05, 2009 8:19 pm
by SHOUTrvb
It's very tacky.. You'd get some serious web-design props if were will still in mid-90s internet, but I just can't approve considering today's standards. In other words, what JK said. You're getting better though.
Re: another attempt
Posted: Sat Mar 07, 2009 4:53 pm
by RaVNzCRoFT
The reflection is very unnecessary, especially since several letters in your username are different letters when flipped upside-down. The "N" in that font, for example, looks like a "U" when flipped. Bad font choice to begin with, but the reflection shouldn't be there.
For the signature as a whole: Not necessarily a bad concept, but the execution is quite poor. An all-white background certainly wasn't the way to go.
Re: another attempt
Posted: Sat Mar 07, 2009 8:25 pm
by Cuda
Yeah, the letter reflection wasn't the right way to go, and reads like DIAWOUDBUCKK PO.
The Alien head's shadowing and reflections contrast a bit, and I don't know why you made the shadow a negative, it just reads weird.
Re: another attempt (UPDATED)
Posted: Sat Mar 07, 2009 9:08 pm
by diamondbackk60
updated with a new sig 2 versions of it let me know what u think
Re: another attempt (UPDATED)
Posted: Sat Mar 07, 2009 9:09 pm
by WaeV
Where is the render's right shoulder? I like it except for the render in general, but something needs to be there. Maybe a different render? If you moved the background to fit the rule of thirds you could get away without one.
Also, use .png
Re: another attempt (UPDATED)
Posted: Sat Mar 07, 2009 11:19 pm
by Cuda
Yeah, the entire sig seems very empty, and I don't really see the necessity of the big white boxes going across the entire thing. You've got to do a bit more with the space given.
Re: another attempt (UPDATED)
Posted: Sun Mar 08, 2009 3:34 pm
by diamondbackk60
about the shoulder thing that is his collar on his jacket it covers his shoulder.. and two i used a png and 3 i dono what else to do with the space lol
Re: another attempt (UPDATED)
Posted: Sun Mar 08, 2009 3:38 pm
by RaVNzCRoFT
You should definitely change the render so that doesn't look weird.
Re: another attempt (UPDATED)
Posted: Mon Mar 09, 2009 7:38 am
by SHOUTrvb
New one looks fine.
Re: another attempt (UPDATED)
Posted: Fri Mar 13, 2009 5:43 am
by DrXThirst
Maybe put your name in the white line/space?
Re: another attempt (UPDATED)
Posted: Fri Mar 13, 2009 9:23 am
by JK-47
Another thing I've noticed is you're using pretty big boarders. Try to keep them smaller, 1px is the standard.