DB60 metal final..

diamondbackk60 · Post by **diamondbackk60** » Thu Jan 22, 2009 9:01 pm

My latest production i cant really do much more with this one give me your advise and comments plz..

Construct Crit please no flaming

thank you
DIAMONDBACKK60

thanks for your help
V1:

V2:

JK-47 · Post by **JK-47** » Thu Jan 22, 2009 9:04 pm

That's actually very convincing. Awesome job.
I'm not really feeling the plain black areas where the cracks are. It kind of makes me feel that the wall is just a really thin layer that's in front of a really dark room or something, it doesn't make me think that the wall has any depth.
You did good on the cracks, but there's just kind of a blank feeling with them.

diamondbackk60 · Post by **diamondbackk60** » Thu Jan 22, 2009 9:06 pm

i was thinkin of maybe a light sourse behind the wall or something.. not sure

CabooseJr · Post by **CabooseJr** » Fri Jan 23, 2009 3:16 am

I'm not really a fan of the repeating scratches found by the "D" also the scratch on "B" could use a little working on.