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I made that in about 2 hrs...just needed some opinions about it!

Try making the Star of David transition from a tranquil gray-green on the right, to a fiery black-orange om the left, just to show the contrast.

Should look nice.

ill give that a try when i get back home thinks for the suggestion.

There's a weird color stripe at the bottom and top. And the picture has a seam.

Fix that, too.

Seems like it's hard to read.
The stripes could be a little less transparent.

Yodel wrote:There's a weird color stripe at the bottom and top. And the picture has a seam.

Fix that, too.

Flag.

The star isn't in the middle.

I like the star one solid color, but I might change my mind if you do a good job editing it.

Danke wrote:Seems like it's hard to read.
The stripes could be a little less transparent.

Nah, the text is fine to read. It's a fundamental prayer of Judaism, so you know what it says even if some particular spots are hard to see.

I like how you put the Shema in there. Clever concept.

Don't take this the wrong way, but what all did you even do? I like the image as a whole; although the text bugs me. Not for any real design-flaw reason though.

just to clarify the reason why I made this is that me and my friend are doing a yom kippur project (Day of Atonement) your supposed to be charitable that day so were selling t-shirts and giving the profits back to our local synagogue, i just wanted to make sure the graphic was perfect before i made the shirt.

SHOUTrvb wrote:Don't take this the wrong way, but what all did you even do? I like the image as a whole; although the text bugs me. Not for any real design-flaw reason though.

Also, it's a little chaotic for a shirt don't you think? I would stick with simply the flag and text for the shirt, and maybe just leave out the image altogether. Or you might could even stick it on the back.