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Cities of Night
Posted: Sat Jun 14, 2008 11:19 am
by JK-47
Since I don't really make any LP's, I decided to jump into it a bit.
I may touch it up a bit when I find out something else to do with it.
Click on the image for a bigger version.
Posted: Sat Jun 14, 2008 11:22 am
by unknownv2
Remove the C4D or whatever that is, it looks bad, and make her shoes less visible through the clouds. Also, tone her colors down a little bit, she shouldn't be so colorful at night, especially in the sky.
Posted: Sat Jun 14, 2008 11:53 am
by JK-47
No C4D:
Toned down C4D:
Probably is best without C4Ds.
Posted: Sat Jun 14, 2008 11:55 am
by unknownv2
The first one looks great.
Posted: Sat Jun 14, 2008 12:01 pm
by DarkShallFall
I like the first one. But the cloud looks to sharpened, kind looks like a rock. Also the bottom of the cloud doesn't fade well and doesn't really have a fluffy shape down there. But good job. Maybe try some of my suggestions.
Edit: Lighting would be cool.
Posted: Sat Jun 14, 2008 12:43 pm
by Dr.Cox
Blend better.
It just looks tacked on.
Posted: Sat Jun 14, 2008 1:41 pm
by JK-47
Dr.Cox wrote:
It just looks tacked on.
Agreed.
I'll work on the blending and a few other mentioned details.
Newer version:
Posted: Sat Jun 14, 2008 1:49 pm
by DEEhunter
The clouds need fixing.
Posted: Sat Jun 14, 2008 1:57 pm
by JK-47
How so?
Posted: Sat Jun 14, 2008 3:28 pm
by Senor_Grunt
The whole thing looks fine to me on that last version you posted. =]
Posted: Sat Jun 14, 2008 7:01 pm
by DEEhunter
It seems off to me how suddenly the clouds she is on have a blue light on it.
Posted: Sat Jun 14, 2008 7:14 pm
by Dsoup
The cloud/girl thing still needs some blending, but it's certainly improved from the first version.
Posted: Sat Jun 14, 2008 7:57 pm
by Ombre
I think you should just get rid of the girl all together, she just doesn't look right with this.
Posted: Sat Jun 14, 2008 8:40 pm
by Dsoup
Well he's taking so many things off it's just going to be the regular stock.
Posted: Sat Jun 14, 2008 10:52 pm
by JK-47
Ombre wrote:I think you should just get rid of the girl all together, she just doesn't look right with this.
I'll do it and release it.. but it's not official, as the girl is a key part of the images' meaning.
You are right, though. It does look appealing without her, yet I prefer her in there at the same time. Thank you for the suggestion, though, I appreciate it.
Here's another fix for the version with the girl based off of other suggestions:
Posted: Sun Jun 15, 2008 2:34 pm
by DRL333
The newer one is the best IMO.
Posted: Sun Jun 15, 2008 7:11 pm
by NotZachary82
Why not blend that one cloud in with the rest of them, then re-add the girl? Just a thought.
Posted: Sun Jun 15, 2008 7:43 pm
by JK-47
That's what I did on the newest version
I took her out, blended the cloud in, put her back in and blended her in with the cloud.
Posted: Mon Jun 16, 2008 8:55 pm
by Dagger13
the top right corner is bothering me but really good still
Posted: Mon Jun 16, 2008 9:01 pm
by JK-47
Dagger13 wrote:the top right corner is bothering me but really good still
It bothers me some as well.. But that's just the night sky behind the cloud.
