Baccano!

Ombre · Post by **Ombre** » Tue Jun 10, 2008 2:09 pm

Well, it's been a really long time since I have made a signature with a render or stock in it. I decided to make a Baccano! one since it is one of my new favorite anime's.

And yes, that is blood he is covered in.

-Legendary- · Post by **-Legendary-** » Tue Jun 10, 2008 2:38 pm

I like it. It just bothers me that that one white line on the left side doesn't touch the bottom.

SHOUTrvb · Post by **SHOUTrvb** » Tue Jun 10, 2008 2:43 pm

Much better than last night. I would have touched up the render more, but it's definitely a large step up. I like it.

-DeToX- · Post by **-DeToX-** » Tue Jun 10, 2008 2:58 pm

I dislike it overall... But that's mainly because of the render. The BG seems like it has some cool potential for a renderless signature... but the render just doesn't look like it has much depth to me and it doesn't seem like its the focal point, though I believe it should be.

The background looks great and alive, and as soon as it hits the render it seems to get darker, less creative, and more boring. Also some parts on the right seem too sharp.

Also the little strip where you wrote Baccano! doesn't really look too good to me. And the blood on his face(?), looks more like a bad shadow.