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critique please, i have original too if anyone wants to see

k, heres the original, so you can see what i did

lawl@spartankick 8/10 for the graffiti style of it but I think the glow under the board killed it.

i was using that for a center of focus. thanks though
anyone else?

that better?

I like it.

I like the graffiti but not much a fan for anything else.

Dsoup wrote:I like the graffiti but not much a fan for anything else.

Agreed. Magenta just feels like the OMG wrong color, and the blurryness of it doesn't seem to fit the super sharpness of the rest.

Its not so much too sharp, just way to over-contrasted. I say keep the thing under his board, but make it a different color, cause it feels empty with out it.

k, anyone got a color that i should use instead of the magenta?

propagandaman wrote:k, anyone got a color that i should use instead of the magenta?

Lime Green,Blue,or a color that blends with the background.

k, the magenta is from the logo on the guys shirt, i enjoy subtle refrences and was hoping someone would notice. ill change it and post by monday

Over-Contrasted.

I think that the look for the graffiti is fine... But I think you need to make the skater and the rail Clean and Pristine looking.