First Space Scene

Sandman · Post by **Sandman** » Sun Nov 26, 2006 8:04 am

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/43659585/

It was a collab with my friend Phil.. you can read about it on DA.. lemme know what you think

RaVNzCRoFT · Post by **RaVNzCRoFT** » Sun Nov 26, 2006 8:09 am

I like it. The planet texture is weird, though. Blur it and it'll look better.

maca_§ · Post by **maca_§** » Mon Nov 27, 2006 9:04 am

I agree, the planet looks a bit weird but the rest is coming along nicely.
Use your Disp Maps

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FleetAdmiralBacon · Post by **FleetAdmiralBacon** » Mon Nov 27, 2006 12:17 pm

Interesting...

When I look up in they sky, I sure as hell don't see that. And we don't have any canyons like that either... The sky doesn't have that radioactive green glow either...
(if you haven't guessed, I live in Ohio)

Phosphorous · Post by **Phosphorous** » Tue Nov 28, 2006 12:23 pm

The landscape is too blurry

Sandman · Post by **Sandman** » Tue Nov 28, 2006 6:50 pm

I didn't make the landscape, Phil did that part. I tried to sharpen it up as best I could..

And yeah, the title is Tool lyrics.

"Under a dead Ohio sky, eleven is and will be waiting"

Any actual resemblance to any person. place, or thing in Ohio is purely coincidental, lol

gh0570fchurch · Post by **gh0570fchurch** » Tue Nov 28, 2006 6:56 pm

Love it, though the planet texture seems kinda flat.

McFarlane · Post by **McFarlane** » Tue Nov 28, 2006 8:11 pm

+shading
-overshadow
+extra space between the planet and terrian
-star count; +star randomness

That was the nicer way to review your lp.

Sandman · Post by **Sandman** » Sat Dec 02, 2006 9:05 pm

Thanks for the comments, anyone else? Any suggestions? I wanna make more of these

JK-47 · Post by **JK-47** » Sat Dec 02, 2006 9:14 pm

I dunno what to say to it other than "wow". You did a great job on that Sandman

The_Hushed_Casket · Post by **The_Hushed_Casket** » Sun Dec 03, 2006 8:45 am

The planet texture is weird - but in a good way; I like it. Great job.

Leiukemia · Post by **Leiukemia** » Sun Dec 03, 2006 11:59 am

I think it looks pretty cool, something you would put on a postcard.