Citadel

hiheyhello · Post by **hiheyhello** » Sat Oct 11, 2008 8:45 am

Isn't that the citadel from Half life?

Anyways i don't like the red lightning bolt

. When i look at te picture my eyes go straight for te lightning bolt when they should look at the citadel.

Maybe change the color or get rid of it, i think it would look good if it was a blue that blends with the sky

AbeFroman · Post by **AbeFroman** » Sat Oct 11, 2008 9:18 am

i would say change the color of the lightning bolt Maybe add another one in the backround, darken the clouds and make it look like there is a spotlight of some sort shining on the citadel, that would be awesome. but it's up to you

CabooseJr · Post by **CabooseJr** » Sat Oct 11, 2008 9:53 am

This looks great, although I'm not too fond of the red lightning bolt.

HPDarkness · Post by **HPDarkness** » Tue Oct 14, 2008 8:40 am

At first I thought it was just a screenshot. Outstanding work on this