Second, better, sig

haloguy234 · Post by **haloguy234** » Sun Feb 04, 2007 12:15 pm

This is my second attempt at a sig. I think it turned out EXTREMELEY well.
Hope you like it!

If that little HaloMods bit under my name is annoying, tell me and I will remove it.
(The reason it takes a bit to load is because it is around 60 kb.)
Edit: Revised (No Lens Flare) -

Edit Edit: No Lens Flare, Blurred Edges, Different Text

Sgt.Peppers · Post by **Sgt.Peppers** » Sun Feb 04, 2007 12:17 pm

It is pretty good, I don't like any of the text , however.

noscottno · Post by **noscottno** » Sun Feb 04, 2007 12:18 pm

What he said ^^. Except It's way to sharp, and I dislike the lens flare.

haloguy234 · Post by **haloguy234** » Sun Feb 04, 2007 1:06 pm

Ok. I changed it a bit.

Macsforever · Post by **Macsforever** » Sun Feb 04, 2007 2:13 pm

dude thats 1337

-DeToX- · Post by **-DeToX-** » Sun Feb 04, 2007 2:15 pm

I don't like how the render and background blend at all. It looks like you just slapped the render on there to me...

It just sticks out in other words.

DRL333 · Post by **DRL333** » Sun Feb 04, 2007 2:20 pm

Blur the edges of the render.

Sgt.Peppers · Post by **Sgt.Peppers** » Sun Feb 04, 2007 2:31 pm

Sorry, I still don't like the text

. Try Choosing a small font, and try to blend it with the image, sorta like mine.

haloguy234 · Post by **haloguy234** » Sun Feb 04, 2007 3:03 pm

Is that better?

gh0570fchurch · Post by **gh0570fchurch** » Sun Feb 04, 2007 4:45 pm

Render is oversharpened. You got a good start, keep working on it.

DRL333 · Post by **DRL333** » Sun Feb 04, 2007 4:46 pm

Yes that is better, good sig for your second.

Skullking · Post by **Skullking** » Sun Feb 04, 2007 4:58 pm

yeah, i think it's good, but the text......

noscottno · Post by **noscottno** » Sun Feb 04, 2007 8:04 pm

I think it's just a choppy render.

xXxCocoFangxXx · Post by **xXxCocoFangxXx** » Sun Feb 04, 2007 8:09 pm

I don't really like the Text.

Dsoup · Post by **Dsoup** » Sun Feb 04, 2007 8:19 pm

The yellow lines don't really match the rest of the sig, and I don't like the render at all.

-DeToX- · Post by **-DeToX-** » Mon Feb 05, 2007 4:54 am

NSN711 wrote:I think it's just a choppy render.

Agreed. Not only does it have a white outline, the quality is low.
And the yellow lines don't fit this sig.