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First model! Tommy Gun! Updated!!!! Now with AVI

Posted: Mon Oct 02, 2006 12:49 pm
by h2modmaster
Continuation of my first model. Check the AVI for best viewing!

If anyone could put it in the game(not sized right), it would be much appreciated (I can't because old GFX card and I get errors) Waterworks preferably but I don't care.

Posted: Mon Oct 02, 2006 1:07 pm
by Alchemist666
To boxy O_O

Posted: Mon Oct 02, 2006 1:44 pm
by fishface617
do you mean a thompson? it looks kinda like a thompson

Posted: Mon Oct 02, 2006 2:03 pm
by GametagAeonFlux
Too boxy, and it looks like the top part near the barrel is missing. Try to use a few reference pictures.

Posted: Mon Oct 02, 2006 2:56 pm
by h2modmaster
Thanks for the critisism guys. Tommy gun, thomson, same thing :p
Ya I made the whole model without reference, just went of memory. I'm upgrading it now. (Can anyone put it ingame?)

Posted: Mon Oct 02, 2006 3:11 pm
by Jsk1610
Doesn't look very accurate. Missing details and not scaled correctly.

Posted: Mon Oct 02, 2006 5:17 pm
by h2modmaster
Here are original pics

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Posted: Mon Oct 02, 2006 6:06 pm
by DoorM4n
thompson? 8)

Posted: Tue Oct 03, 2006 1:32 am
by Btd69
OMG U ARGH HEEPAS GOOD!!!! PLESZ CNA IE MAK A MDOLLING TMEE WHTE YOU@ PLXUYSDFHZ!!!11

Posted: Tue Oct 03, 2006 1:33 am
by =Hunter=
Far too boxy. Disproportionate. Bland. Lacks any sort of detail or accuracy to the real thing. Find reference pictures and modeling tutorials and start over.

Also, btd wins the thread.

Posted: Tue Oct 03, 2006 7:34 am
by h2modmaster
What specific parts could use work? (Circle in MS paint?)

Posted: Tue Oct 03, 2006 9:47 am
by =Hunter=
The whole thing...

Posted: Tue Oct 03, 2006 10:33 am
by h2modmaster
=Hunter= wrote:The whole thing...
LOL :P , well I just got a reference picture and have started a whole new one. Maybe this one will turn out better :oops:

Posted: Tue Oct 03, 2006 12:37 pm
by SHOUTrvb
Looks like something off Goldeneye 64. This would be 1337 10/10 h4x in 1997. Now it's just decent. Oh, and Thomposon = Tommy-gun.

Posted: Tue Oct 03, 2006 8:26 pm
by =Hunter=
h2modmaster wrote:
=Hunter= wrote:The whole thing...
LOL :P , well I just got a reference picture and have started a whole new one. Maybe this one will turn out better :oops:
I await this new model with much eagerness. ;)

Even if a model comes out bad, keep at it, you'll learn as you go from experimenting and the C&C people give you.

Posted: Wed Oct 04, 2006 12:04 pm
by h2modmaster
=Hunter= wrote:
h2modmaster wrote:
=Hunter= wrote:The whole thing...
LOL :P , well I just got a reference picture and have started a whole new one. Maybe this one will turn out better :oops:
I await this new model with much eagerness. ;)

Even if a model comes out bad, keep at it, you'll learn as you go from experimenting and the C&C people give you.
Thanks, I'm not immature like some people when it comes to getting critism. Even if I think its good, it doesn't mean it is. Some people just don't get that.

Well back on modeling... I'm pretty much done but I have to figure out how to smooth out the handle, and there are not many Anim8or tutorials out there. This could take awhile. Heres 1 of the pics so far. (Please ignore the hastily thrown together textures.)

Posted: Wed Oct 04, 2006 5:33 pm
by HaloDude360
This one is a lot better. Tho im not one to critisize cause i cant model whatsoever

Posted: Wed Oct 04, 2006 7:02 pm
by RA1N THE ELITE
pretty cool. 8/10.

Posted: Thu Oct 05, 2006 11:57 am
by h2modmaster
HaloDude360 wrote:This one is a lot better. Tho im not one to critisize cause i cant model whatsoever
Critisize all you want!

Posted: Thu Oct 05, 2006 1:08 pm
by h2modmaster
updated