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[map]Large

Posted: Sun Feb 18, 2007 12:20 pm
by hihi88
Hi guys, this is my first map. I am a noob at mapping and when I typed in the size I thought it would be actually large. I guess not. Well after failing many times in making maps I finally made this one.

Weapons.
Uzi
smg
railgun
scout(sniper rifle)
dual pistols
a few more

vehicles
Goose
segway
LAAG turret

One somewhat secret room. There is a special way to get in and it is guarded by ai.

many other cool things.

credit is in the folder

Image

Image

Image

Image

Only known bug is that when you are not carrying the flag it is only a pole.


supports

slayer
ctf

http://www.savefile.com/files/501234

Posted: Sun Feb 18, 2007 12:48 pm
by JunkfoodMan
Cliffs are straight, UVW Map errors all over the place, Not really any strategy to go with this map, just Run and shoot.
The randomly placed building on top of the cliffs + the LAAG turret dont really cut it for me. I'm glad seeing all of the custom content, but, I'm not sure if you made any of this.
Take this criticism and build upon it, I'm not trying to be harsh, its the truth.
Take a look at the maps in the Outstanding mods section, and compare this map to theirs. If you look at theirs and think "Wow, I can't model like that!", well, practice, read tutorials, and get better ^_^

Posted: Sun Feb 18, 2007 12:52 pm
by hihi88
I made the map so people could have fun with it. Also randomly placed buildingS? If you look, there right by the bases. Each building is to guard the base

Posted: Mon Feb 19, 2007 10:23 am
by llamaboy772
Judging by the BSP I doubt you made any of the custom content in this map. Watch some more tutorials before you make your next map, the BSP is really bad. (yes I know I sound mean, but it's true)

Posted: Sat Feb 24, 2007 2:07 pm
by HaloDude360
Arent those the bases out of blood gulch??

Posted: Sat Feb 24, 2007 5:07 pm
by llamaboy772
HaloDude360 wrote:Arent those the bases out of blood gulch??
Yes, and I HATE the person who made it into a scenery tag. :evil:

Posted: Sat Feb 24, 2007 5:41 pm
by hihi88
sorry it was my first map. I got 280 dl's so far so is that good or bad for a first?

Posted: Mon Feb 26, 2007 5:45 am
by CDK908
...... first off the green thing in this place. very bad camoflague(srry if i spelled it wrong) and is really a dead give away with the rainbow telly shield next to it. but give him a break, bungie use striaght cliffs but you need to make it not so straight edge and what's with the bg bases anyway.

Posted: Mon Feb 26, 2007 1:10 pm
by TomClancey
Bungie doesn't sure "Straight Cliffs". Bungies cliffs aren't perfect, but there not just extruded faces.

Posted: Mon Feb 26, 2007 2:45 pm
by halo0001
ok gj for a first? but ya u need to open that bsp back up and make the cliffs more rugged like teh real thing, also do some skinnig on that green thing it looks kinda well out of place. but still dosent look horrible...o and the uvw errors need to be fixed as well, also that green thing looks just like the thing from GTA:vice city when ur trying to kill that golf guy and hes standing on top of that thing golfing just thought id metion that.

Posted: Sat Mar 03, 2007 2:37 pm
by LegendaryKiller
Loooks like the graaand canyon but a smaller version.