A base 3d model

saddamsdevil · Post by **saddamsdevil** » Wed Dec 28, 2005 5:06 am

I made a model of a base in 3ds max, If you want it, PM me.
The first pic is a overview with the location of the renders I made, click the link with the corresponding number to see a rendered shot with a master chief on it.

all pics are 1280x1024
rendered shots:
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Don't mind the crappy textures, they are not included.

dale181 · Post by **dale181** » Wed Dec 28, 2005 5:09 am

DONT even think of posting here excellent man/merry man/big man
pretty good Give it glass and a roof and itll be good 9/10

Malf · Post by **Malf** » Wed Dec 28, 2005 5:12 am

This seems pretty basic. The Excellent Man will rate it 3/10, as it is obviously one of your first tries and you have put some effort into it. The Excellent Man suggests you try to make it more detailed, and spend a little while longer on the scenes.

dale181 · Post by **dale181** » Wed Dec 28, 2005 5:24 am

The Excellent Man wrote:This seems pretty basic. The Excellent Man will rate it 3/10, as it is obviously one of your first tries and you have put some effort into it. The Excellent Man suggests you try to make it more detailed, and spend a little while longer on the scenes.

stfu what have you done in 3d modelling,modding or even posting any work all you have posted is your stupid spam "awards" that have no meaning whatsoever I geive you the very very unexcellent award for your stupidity. saddam pay no attention to this loser he has no life.

nice model

Malf · Post by **Malf** » Wed Dec 28, 2005 5:25 am

dale181 wrote:
The Excellent Man wrote:This seems pretty basic. The Excellent Man will rate it 3/10, as it is obviously one of your first tries and you have put some effort into it. The Excellent Man suggests you try to make it more detailed, and spend a little while longer on the scenes.
stfu what have you done in 3d modelling,modding or even posting any work all you have posted is your stupid spam "awards" that have no meaning whatsoever I geive you the very very unexcellent award for your stupidity. saddam pay no attention to this loser he has no life.

nice model

I will be reporting all your abusive posts. Good day sir.

Aztec · Post by **Aztec** » Wed Dec 28, 2005 5:26 am

First Warning dale. His comments are constructive, there is no need to be hostile.

saddamsdevil · Post by **saddamsdevil** » Wed Dec 28, 2005 5:35 am

excelent man why are you guys talking in 3rd person? and yes, this is my first try at a real base.

Munsie · Post by **Munsie** » Wed Dec 28, 2005 7:10 am

Yea Saddam, if you just mirror that, and put those bases in a big room.. or a canyon, or a crater.. add some vehicles, you'll be all set

~Munsie

saddamsdevil · Post by **saddamsdevil** » Wed Dec 28, 2005 9:55 am

I am making a map named Death Arena, does anybody know where to get Blitzkrieg (or W/E) for 3ds max 7?

I got the model for the map ready so... it's gonna be a basic map, just a arena with vehicles and some weapons, GREAT for team slayer.

saddamsdevil · Post by **saddamsdevil** » Wed Dec 28, 2005 11:35 am

I tried evrything and I got some errors... I can't fix it... (the model isn't good I think) can anyone help me!?!? (Huge credit given on release!)

The Big Man · Post by **The Big Man** » Wed Dec 28, 2005 12:36 pm

The Big Man believes that the Blitzkrieg

saddamsdevil · Post by **saddamsdevil** » Wed Dec 28, 2005 1:55 pm

Hek came with blitzkrieg for max 5

saddamsdevil · Post by **saddamsdevil** » Thu Dec 29, 2005 11:47 am

The first pic of my map!
(I haven't got it ingame yet because of errors in the map... I can't fix them so.... anyone?)

Offspring · Post by **Offspring** » Thu Dec 29, 2005 11:55 am

yeah that base needs work nice try tho...

Obaten · Post by **Obaten** » Thu Dec 29, 2005 11:53 pm

that base looks hmm.... not "basey" enough. try adding walls or something

SnaFuBAR · Post by **SnaFuBAR** » Fri Dec 30, 2005 1:34 am

excellent man, i think you're extremely annoying. i wonder if you've gotten any warnings for your spam.

saddam, keep up the good work. you're doing fine. i'm not going to rate it. you have a ways to go, but you're doing ok. what look were you going for? human base? forerunner base? obviously not covenant so i won't put that up as a possibility.

at the moment it's ambiguous, but your modeling seems decent. nice work.

Kirk · Post by **Kirk** » Fri Dec 30, 2005 2:00 am

SnaFuBAR wrote:excellent man, i think you're extremely annoying. i wonder if you've gotten any warnings for your spam.

The Excellent Man has broken no rule that I have seen in any of his posts.

SnaFuBAR · Post by **SnaFuBAR** » Fri Dec 30, 2005 2:22 am

you think that posting all of those "excellent awards" without any real critique is not spam? i may have a different definition of spam than yourself, but i feel that it's pointless. pointless= spam

anyways, staying ON TOPIC...

Saddam, i can appreciate what you did with renders 1-5. they illustrate the realative size of the base very well. however, the blotchy texture you applied makes it relatively hard to understand the surfaces, as the geometry is broken up. it has a camo-like effect. perhaps try to do clay renders. everything could be gray, on a gray plane, with a gray material applied to the mc as well. well, probably go a shade or two lighter on chief.

also, your use of the sky in the background does not help illustrate anything about your bases. perhaps change the environment color to a light blue to simulate sky. a plane with a jpg of sky applied is er... well, not working out too well.

upon further review of the geometry, it looks like you may have some errors. to the right side of the ramp, where it ends, up top (on the wall) it looks like you have some extra polies or vertices. you may want to check that out. good luck.

^^^
note: an example of a constructive post and critique.

saddamsdevil · Post by **saddamsdevil** » Fri Dec 30, 2005 11:55 am

Death Arena is a fact. It's just pre alpha, so this pic are FAR from the final product!

1 question thought... how come my bitmaps weren't converted along with my map?