Render Gallery Submission Thread (Updated 8-13) 56k warning

darco9x2 · Post by **darco9x2** » Mon Jun 26, 2006 2:13 pm

ben its secksy, but i dont like the bump on the visor. it looks like it would obstruct his view.

and for the ar, maybe they just havent gotten to that part yet?
on the right hand, the 3'rd finger looks like it has a stretched vertice.

benman08 · Post by **benman08** » Mon Jun 26, 2006 5:34 pm

Chief Cow · Post by **Chief Cow** » Mon Jun 26, 2006 8:37 pm

I dont know what it is, the armor just doesnt look like armor

but the visor looks nice

Kirk · Post by **Kirk** » Mon Jun 26, 2006 9:09 pm

The armor is to dull, it's supposed to be shiny.

AjemsuhgaoII · Post by **AjemsuhgaoII** » Mon Jun 26, 2006 10:55 pm

The armor bump looks nice...but that's the only thing. The rest isn't even decent. >_>

Veegie[Temp] · Post by **Veegie[Temp]** » Tue Jun 27, 2006 8:28 pm

It may be perfect for all I know, but that just...well...it just looks bad.

Patrickssj6 · Post by **Patrickssj6** » Tue Jun 27, 2006 8:31 pm

Is it also necessary to make the images so big?

If people say its good and they want it then you can post a big version.

HK-47 · Post by **HK-47** » Tue Jun 27, 2006 8:44 pm

Veegie wrote:It may be perfect for all I know, but that just...well...it just looks bad.

Thats a really good point.

darco9x2 · Post by **darco9x2** » Tue Jun 27, 2006 11:59 pm

Patrickssj6 wrote:Is it also necessary to make the images so big?

If people say its good and they want it then you can post a big version.

if you render small you cant see the details very well.

Veegie[Temp] · Post by **Veegie[Temp]** » Wed Jun 28, 2006 12:08 am

Which is quite unfortunate for him right now.

Jordan · Post by **Jordan** » Wed Jun 28, 2006 6:37 am

Or you could just post thumbnail links.

Tanasoo · Post by **Tanasoo** » Thu Jun 29, 2006 9:07 pm

Ok Guys, here it is! Tell me what you think.

Here is the High(er) res one:

HighRes

Hope you like it

!

darco9x2 · Post by **darco9x2** » Thu Jun 29, 2006 9:12 pm

chief needs blur. how do you do the blood and the gun shot? other than that, i like it a lot!

Tanasoo · Post by **Tanasoo** » Thu Jun 29, 2006 9:28 pm

I actually decided not to add Blurs because there were so many moving objects in the scene, they made it look kind of nasty. The blood and Muzzle flash were simply extracted with Ch2r and put on planes with opacity maps.

Veegie[Temp] · Post by **Veegie[Temp]** » Thu Jun 29, 2006 9:46 pm

LOL
Wow.
That's just plain bad.
I'm sorry if you put a lot of work into it.

GametagAeonFlux · Post by **GametagAeonFlux** » Thu Jun 29, 2006 9:50 pm

Veegie wrote:LOL
Wow.
That's just plain bad.
I'm sorry if you put a lot of work into it.

Provide something constructive. The scene idea is fantastic, but the materials could use a little help.

Anyways, the Plasma Rifle bullets look like Needler needles, and the Battle Rifle/Carbine shots look like rods.

Try using xbox7887's time freeze trainer (or Paulus' DevTrainer for PC) to get a good idea of what the projectiles look like.

Actually...I'm not sure xbox's freezes projectiles like Paulus' did/does.

Tanasoo · Post by **Tanasoo** » Thu Jun 29, 2006 9:51 pm

... Mind going into some more detail than that?

*edit*
VV sorry, I was talking to Veegie.
Thanks, I'll work on the projectiles.

GametagAeonFlux · Post by **GametagAeonFlux** » Thu Jun 29, 2006 9:52 pm

Tanasoo wrote:... Mind going into some more detail than that?

Me? Or Veegie?

Veegie[Temp] · Post by **Veegie[Temp]** » Thu Jun 29, 2006 10:26 pm

Provide something constructive.

No.

Work on your scenes elsewhere. There are topics for it.

Kirk · Post by **Kirk** » Thu Jun 29, 2006 11:41 pm

Well I like it kind of like how GTAF... the idea is good, but it needs serious work. As Veegie said, ask for help in other topics. There's even a 3dsMax rendering help topic there for your convenience...