Halo Art Showcase / Critique

benman08 · Post by **benman08** » Mon Aug 07, 2006 11:39 am

Test 1 and 2

Here are my first two tests, a lot more is being done, so do not think this is what the final is going to look like. When i downsized, it killed the quality, so that is why it seems dark.

GametagAeonFlux · Post by **GametagAeonFlux** » Mon Aug 07, 2006 12:59 pm

Kinda a weird sequence for the Chief...seemed kinda...girly.

Tural · Post by **Tural** » Mon Aug 07, 2006 1:22 pm

His feet shouldn't be flat against the wall.

Jordan · Post by **Jordan** » Mon Aug 07, 2006 1:29 pm

His pointed toes make it seem really weird.

darco9x2 · Post by **darco9x2** » Mon Aug 07, 2006 6:23 pm

it goes kinda look like a chick, but its other than that the movement seems to flow very well.

Sarb · Post by **Sarb** » Mon Aug 07, 2006 7:33 pm

GametagAeonFlux wrote:Kinda a weird sequence for the Chief...seemed kinda...girly.

Haha, I was thinking the exact same thing. I think you should add that yellow-orangish tint to the visor, right now it's ugly...

Chief Cow · Post by **Chief Cow** » Tue Aug 08, 2006 9:02 am

at least make the background blue?

darco9x2 · Post by **darco9x2** » Tue Aug 08, 2006 9:05 pm

Veegie[Temp] · Post by **Veegie[Temp]** » Wed Aug 09, 2006 12:37 am

To Darco and Ben; Your normal maps are very minimally pronounced, and your models are ridiculously, and unnaturally reflective.

Ben: The back is slouched over, very unnatural for John's military mind-set and habits. Also, the feet are odd and unnatural.

darco9x2 · Post by **darco9x2** » Wed Aug 09, 2006 5:51 am

sweet you're back!

Offspring · Post by **Offspring** » Wed Aug 09, 2006 7:33 am

Yeah i think you need to un-slouch his backbone and lean his pelvis in more, Veegie is right John or even the other Mc's for that matter have a tendency for good posture.

darco9x2 · Post by **darco9x2** » Wed Aug 09, 2006 8:24 am

better?

edit: ignore the wheel textures not being aligned, im gonna try to fix the unwrap so they line up. and the chain gun textures are not all applied to the right part of the mesh, ignore that too for now.

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Veegie[Temp] · Post by **Veegie[Temp]** » Wed Aug 09, 2006 10:08 am

Slightly. But the Masterchief looks desaturated now.

trepdimeflou · Post by **trepdimeflou** » Thu Aug 10, 2006 3:26 am

A small preview WIP of what's to come in my newest project.

Jordan · Post by **Jordan** » Thu Aug 10, 2006 6:59 am

The Elites' hands look to reflective. I love the posing.

GametagAeonFlux · Post by **GametagAeonFlux** » Thu Aug 10, 2006 7:37 am

Very nice trep, great job so far.

dec1234 · Post by **dec1234** » Thu Aug 10, 2006 7:48 am

trepdimeflou wrote: http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/803/ ... akerl3.jpg

A small preview WIP of what's to come in my newest project.

WHOA that looks soo realistic!! Very nice!

Chief Cow · Post by **Chief Cow** » Thu Aug 10, 2006 8:25 am

Nice, but turn down the reflections on the skin areas

darco9x2 · Post by **darco9x2** » Thu Aug 10, 2006 8:48 am

its not skin

Jordan · Post by **Jordan** » Thu Aug 10, 2006 12:44 pm

It's not skin? Really?

Then turn down reflections on the "black" parts.