(model) my first, jackal 13mm

INSANEdrive · Post by **INSANEdrive** » Fri Dec 23, 2005 8:03 am

Not Bad for your first...But ya really should smooth it a bit... it looks like it could cut a rose

TheNox · Post by **TheNox** » Fri Dec 23, 2005 8:05 am

i asure you there is a trigger, if you look up the jackal 13mm its a very "boxy gun" (its why i chose it), ill have to add a magazine

is there a way of smoothing edges in milkshape? witout having to remake verticies and faces?

TheNox · Post by **TheNox** » Fri Dec 23, 2005 12:40 pm

this any better?

rentafence · Post by **rentafence** » Fri Dec 23, 2005 5:57 pm

Trigger guard is too thick, the handle is too thick and too flat, and the entire thing needs more detail

TheNox · Post by **TheNox** » Sat Dec 24, 2005 4:02 am

the trigger guard is still to thick? i slimed it down cocederably

saddamsdevil · Post by **saddamsdevil** » Sat Dec 24, 2005 7:58 am

TheNox wrote:
Logan: Ok, now, some basic rules

No flaming of any kind. Now considering halomods past, this may be hard for you to abide by, but, if you don't, you will get the boot. Flaming is when you attack a person, or attacking a mod with absolutely no warrant or constructive critics Ex: Someone makes a crappy map, resist the urge to just call him names and tell him the map is crap, you may not make fun of the author, call the author names (elementary style), or attack the persons character at all, that is considered flaming, and is no longer tolerated

You know that there is a rule agains spamming too right? I now officially hate quote spammers.

You should get a better, detailed skin, get more reference pics of the gun and get some more detail on the model.

You have a good start, now have a good end and finish it.

Dootuz · Post by **Dootuz** » Sun Dec 25, 2005 9:52 am

its a litttle boxey. but keep trying

Dootuz