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[Skin] Alien Plasma Rifle

Posted: Sat Apr 26, 2008 9:03 am
by CmdAlien
I made this skin today. It took awhile for me to get the colors just right. This is only my 4th skin, so any feedback on it would be great. Hope you all like it.
- Alien

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Posted: Sat Apr 26, 2008 9:12 am
by bcnipod
try to make the colours blend more, then post it again in this thread.

Posted: Sat Apr 26, 2008 9:28 am
by CmdAlien
bcnipod wrote:try to make the colours blend more, then post it again in this thread.
I will try to make it blend more, but this being my only skin with this kind of skin make up, I might not get it. I will try though thanks.

Posted: Sat Apr 26, 2008 9:43 am
by Mr.Brightside
Looks like a shader swap.

Posted: Sat Apr 26, 2008 10:18 am
by MoDFox
No offense but that looks disgusting.
First off, the green parts aren't even the same shade.
But keep working on it, maybe not this one but try making another.

Posted: Sat Apr 26, 2008 10:21 am
by Andrew_b
Gross

Posted: Sat Apr 26, 2008 1:21 pm
by CmdAlien
gee thanks. Thanks for helping ppl lol.

Posted: Sat Apr 26, 2008 1:25 pm
by CmdAlien
would it help you all if I changed the colors. OR do you all just not liek it over all?

Posted: Sat Apr 26, 2008 7:09 pm
by hell_knight
LMAO
you could instead make it just a shade of red, and give it the yellow cubemaps, that would look a lot better.

Posted: Sun Apr 27, 2008 7:23 am
by Philly
It's... corrupted?

Posted: Sun Apr 27, 2008 4:15 pm
by Loor
You guys are always really mean.

But Honestly, it looks like you just sprayed yellow paint on it. Try making the colours have a purpose. Like lines down the gun, rather than spays of paint.

Posted: Sun Apr 27, 2008 4:18 pm
by DEEhunter
Looks like the plasma rifle barfed.

Posted: Sun Apr 27, 2008 4:30 pm
by MarsMartianMan
Loor wrote:You guys are always really mean.
Its not being mean, its called critiquing. And we are critiquing this skin as a not very good skin.

Posted: Sun Apr 27, 2008 4:32 pm
by CmdAlien
lol. Ok well I will make a new one and post it when I am done. I thought it was cool with the yellow/green on it, but I guess you guys do not. I will keep the bottom layer shade of red and put some other kinda design on it.

Posted: Sun Apr 27, 2008 4:35 pm
by CmdAlien
well you all should at least tell me how to make it better. Only like 3 ppl have gave advice lol. Criticizing has no purpose if it does not help the person out.

Posted: Sun Apr 27, 2008 4:37 pm
by MarsMartianMan
1. Stop double posting.

2.
hell_knight wrote:make it just a shade of red, and give it the yellow cubemaps, that would look a lot better.

Posted: Sun Apr 27, 2008 4:37 pm
by CDK908
what is that!?!?!?!? it looks like you took the brute plasma rifle from halo 2, which was already crappy in my opinion, and puke all over it and call it a skin. srry not very good like the others said.

Posted: Mon Apr 28, 2008 8:22 am
by Philly
I'll elaborate on my earlier post. This skin is corrupted; it should not have been posted. The colours don't match the plasma bolts or smoke, and neither does the gauge. The skin hasn't been clened up in any way, there is no new multipurpose or any new shaders. Think about these things before posting. A guy in the Mac section made a red plasma rifle skin, which turned out really nice because he changed all the things which i have mentioned.
Loor wrote:You guys are always really mean.
No, we're just honest. You don't get anywhere by sitting around lying about how nice things are.
CDK908 wrote:It looks like you took the brute plasma rifle from Halo 2, which was already crappy in my opinion
:evil: Don't insult the plasma riflez. I like plasma rifles. Do you like plasma rifles?

Posted: Mon Apr 28, 2008 3:35 pm
by Loor
Yeah, but all you say is,

"Yuck" "Corrupted" "Eww" etc.

When you could say something like

"I don't like it sorry. It looks like ....., you should ..... then it would look better."

Posted: Mon Apr 28, 2008 4:35 pm
by CDK908
Philly wrote:
CDK908 wrote:It looks like you took the brute plasma rifle from Halo 2, which was already crappy in my opinion
:evil: Don't insult the plasma riflez. I like plasma rifles. Do you like plasma rifles?
im not insaulting teh reg plasma rifles. i just don't like the brute's version of the pr. it has faster rof and overheat too quickly...and i thought it's against the rules to post dds formats?