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[Model][WIP] Beretta M9

Posted: Wed Apr 16, 2008 6:24 pm
by au5t3n5
ok, so bfeo flames wanted me to try out a beretta model...and here it is, this is my first pistol remodel, so i dont really have that much experience with it...

the fp pics are taken with the h3 pistol animations, because the default animations for h1 made the model looks like (@#*@ and there are other little things but i wont even bother getting into that

anyhow, as you can see in the pics, the slide works like the real thing i believe; there is that small thing in the front when the slide goes back that i cant remove because i must have scaled it with the front piece to the point that no matter how i try to scale back it is lost and cannot be found in the modeling program =( oh well, my first pistol remodel so what can i say?

raw model:

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spawn:

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first person:

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third person:

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EDIT: FP model fixed (kinda..ish..you tell me)

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any criticism would be good

Posted: Wed Apr 16, 2008 6:33 pm
by {TP}Spartan
I'm glad this is only a WIP

Kinda messy but it's not a start not bad

Posted: Wed Apr 16, 2008 6:39 pm
by UPS
Yeah, you've gotten the general shape down nicely, but there are quite a few flaws as of now. Keep working on it, I'd like to see this finished.

Posted: Wed Apr 16, 2008 6:43 pm
by WaeV
yeah, it can be improved but the essence of it is there.

Posted: Thu Apr 17, 2008 2:30 am
by [RR]RedRene
WTF is wrong with that Spartan?

It's nice, still need's some work thoguh, as I can see the skin stretching, 7/10.

Posted: Thu Apr 17, 2008 3:11 am
by Loor
Looks quite good, apart from the fact that the 3rd person seems to be missing fingers.

Also, whats that sniper model? I like it :P

Posted: Thu Apr 17, 2008 5:45 am
by Achronos-117
[RR]RedRene wrote:WTF is wrong with that Spartan?

It's nice, still need's some work thoguh, as I can see the skin stretching, 7/10.
Its on low textures, anyway the models good 8/10 from me

Posted: Thu Apr 17, 2008 10:16 am
by The.Only.Assault
wow that looks pretty sexy :D.

But in the edit i think the back looks worse than the first one. but thats just my opinion. 7/10 because of the back part.

BTW, Whats wrong with his fingers? :?

Posted: Thu Apr 17, 2008 3:22 pm
by bigshot007
Yeah, alright. Very messy. You got the basic shape down, so I think it could look awesome! keep working on it. :)


Wheres the download?

Posted: Thu Apr 17, 2008 3:28 pm
by au5t3n5
Achronos-117 wrote:Its on low textures, anyway the models good 8/10 from me
yes, i had to upgrade my xp lappy to vista cause i killed xp, soo halo must run on low everything so as to keep my lappy from melting/exploding on me
Loor wrote:Looks quite good, apart from the fact that the 3rd person seems to be missing fingers.

Also, whats that sniper model? I like it :P
its just something i threw together

its at bfeo http://www.bfeo.org/forum/index.php?topic=303.0

i can upload here later i spose...

Posted: Sat Apr 19, 2008 1:20 pm
by shortbusheros4
yeah, most models i've seen are nice and clean and such BUT lack detail and therefore = BORING!!

yeah, it bugs me when people are all like "hey look! I made a model of a real gun!!" then its just a black rectangular boxy thing with no way of telling where any of the detail or anything is.

this model actually is pretty flashy with the amount of details that you are trying to achieve and looks like it would be way cool if you just got it all the way cleaned up! =)

Posted: Wed Apr 23, 2008 6:19 am
by flea925
needs a new skin....

Posted: Tue Sep 16, 2008 12:41 pm
by sashankta
nuuu, download dissappeared

Posted: Tue Sep 16, 2008 1:40 pm
by Cobain
The.Only.Assault wrote:wow that looks pretty sexy :D.

But in the edit i think the back looks worse than the first one. but thats just my opinion. 7/10 because of the back part.

BTW, Whats wrong with his fingers? :?
you should probably tak eof that animated sig......


.....................on topic.................
it actually is pretty good.
but there is lots of stretching and stray verts
generally in a situation like
this it better to start from scratch and try not to move verts in
such an aggressive manner.

Posted: Tue Sep 16, 2008 2:01 pm
by JK-47
The shape is good, but it's a little messy.
Decent start.

Posted: Tue Sep 16, 2008 2:34 pm
by Hero200
thats pretty cool

Posted: Tue Sep 16, 2008 2:48 pm
by Mr.Brightside
almost a one month bump, btw.


Looks extremely stretched.

Posted: Tue Sep 16, 2008 2:53 pm
by DeadHamster
If he had a good skin for it a month ago, it would've been good.

Posted: Wed Sep 17, 2008 3:41 pm
by Cobain
oh holy crap did i do that?

Posted: Wed Sep 17, 2008 3:57 pm
by AbeFroman
nah, look one post above your's